Here is my review
Graphics - Just sprites. But you need to improve in using them. Like when Sonic got the soda that didn't look right
Style - It's a nice and smooth storyline and you know what's going on. But things happen too fast in it like the mcdonalds part.
Sound - Nothing wrong in my opinion. The music suited house lifestyle
Violence - Only when Tails died game over. But that was TOO slow
Interactivity - Let the arrows save you. You click them and Sonic walks there. Besides some scenes were a bit too long. Some people would think that Knuckle's dream is some spam flash because it was too long. Please try to keep your flash clean also
Humor - It was okay because the humor was light and there was nothing too rude in it. Like when Knuckles needed pills.
Overall - I just know you'll be much better next time