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Now suggestions time!
The main flaw in this game is that you lose lives so fast, it makes the game not fun to just keep restarting. Now I'm not saying make it easier or anything. Perhaps you could just double the number of lives in this game? It lacks that
Secondly, pressing Z every time you touch one of those mines or whatever they are, doesn't always work. Okay, maybe pressing Z is a good idea but you should make it so that it's instant instead of being directly on top of it to make it work. If that is too hard to input.. then perhaps just make it so that you don't have to press Z at all and only touch it? I love the boost idea, idiots who don't want for the screen to move further down would use that to smash into a wall, lovely. Don't alter the boost, it's awesome. Perhaps you could make it so that there is a sideways boost as well? It wouldn't give too much advantage in movement but, there are some juicy looking horizontal lines sometimes which I can't take out due to that Z button problem. Fix those two problems and the game will be much better. I vote 5 for you.
Author's Response:
Hey Arnas, Thank YOU for making the music =) it's great!
A few people have mentioned the lives. It is a hard game, and I wanted it to be that way as a challenge to try and complete it. You do get an extra life after each level, so if you try to get through the first couple of levels without losing a life, then you will be in a better position to try and complete it.
The z key problem completely baffles me. I had the same problem, but I thought it was just my keyboard (which is always getting stuck). The code is set up so as long as the "target locked" graphic is showing, you can destroy the target. The lack of response sometimes is really strange.
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"Thank you for using my music in this game"
The idea is good. If you could make it that the ball always bounces upwards when you click it. It would have been much more addictive. Though, there is a major flaw that kills the whole game. Try clicking the ball as if you are dragging it. It will always stay still. This is a major glitch. Basically, you can just get as high of a score as you want. It would be the same as clicking to get a score
When I submit the score, why can't I enter my own name? Besides it says nothing after you submit it. I want to look at the highscores. Where can I do that? I want to see who scored top but I can't
Those two are major flaws
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To be honest, I had a similar idea to yours. This style is awesome. I don't know how long you took to make this but I'd recommend making a second part but with blood and sounds in it. Also I think the yellow guy at the end should have gotten stuck instead of getting killed. It would have made it more original looking. All of these people also died in the same way. I liked how that guy lifted up the block with his two hands. That was probably my favourite part. I understand how hard it was making this. Are you going to make another?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure, if i do it's going to be a project for home because i did this in school so i wanted to keep it clean as to not get in trouble... But i guess if people really did like it i might make a second, any thoughts on names?
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The only thing I didn't like is the lack of upgrades to a certain tower. That would have rocked.
http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/31 27/screenylq0.png Here's a screenshot of how I lost. The sounds got really annoying near the end that I had to turn them off to save my ears. Seeing how I got to this level. You KNOW I enjoyed it. Well done.
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MY BLUE B COMES TO LIFE! (See my flash ;P)
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It was great! I love Aphex Twin and how this flash rhymed with this song and is full of randomness. though I never heard that song before but I loved it. The only thing I really didn't like is the flashing. No one liked a lot of flashing. It can trigger epileptic people seizures. Aside from that it pwned. I 5'ed it and hope it gets front paged
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Well I think this one was a bit too slow. And the electricity coming from the light needed ore work. Hmm.. I liked the lights in this one and when it goes dark. As I said. Make their eyes look better. Not black ovals. Maybe white with black dots in them. That would be better. Make them look different too. Wear different clothes. Also the music didn't suit the scene it was like there was a party in the room or something. Oh and try to make the storyline a little more interesting. Like a hilarious event. I don't get how he got an electric shock from trying to fix a broken bulb though. Keep it up. If you need a specific music PM me. All my music is very different from each other.
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You made 7 episodes already? I think I missed out the rest. I only saw the first few and now this. You're getting much better at flash! I voted 5. As for suggestions. Try to use more gradients I guess. Maybe make the circle things not look the same? Like have differet eyes. Gender etc
Oh by the way. Want to use some of my music for these in your future flashes?
Author's Response:
lol yeah, my episodes have been moving faster than i really expected. thanks your reviews and feedback!
wow, cool yeah ill check out your music and see what i can do =) thank you!
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The things that could have been better are the graphics. Kind of didn't prefer it to be an animation that looks like on lined paper. As for the music. I think you should have picked the original beat instead of some midi version.
Anyway this has a chance for front page
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Well it was funny I watched until the end. Sorta slow in ways and the voices were good. Don't worry about the graphics. Maybe you were meant to make them like that... I can't believe I was eating while watching this! Appetite! Well good work. It was sort of original but got a little crazy near the end
Author's Response:
Thanks ;)
Yea. Me and my brother gave eatch other 30 minutes to make a movie. So i could'not make to serius animations.
But this movie are 3 movies in 1. I released them one by one on my own homezite :)
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